Wednesday, November 05, 2008

#5: Touch

The old man drinks much
At heart, he's a gentle touch
Sadly, he's failing
.

4 comments:

PI said...

I'm kneeling on peas as we speak.

PI said...

Oooh I've just seen Zinnia's helpful comment. No that's not it. Here it comes:-
I'm truly sorry,
And I am deeply grateful,
To sweet Zinnia.

OldHorsetailSnake said...

haiku troubles me
though why it should I know not;
pennies from heaven.

Shane said...

Patty Pat-Pat-Pat
Welcome to The Haiku Club
No more apols* please

* A terribly tricksy abbreviation, for sure. But Pat - note - I thought your reference to smug b------s was really very funny. It made me smile. Stop apologizing!

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