Sunday, November 02, 2008

#2: Tease

A relationship
Forged through a haiku ding-dong
Disgorged: right and wrong
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4 comments:

Zinnia Cyclamen said...

Leaving a comment
Is a safe relationship
Dear old blogging

Shane said...

Zinnia, flower
I'm awash with shoots and seeds
Dear old botany

Pat said...

I don't know how to:(

Zinnia Cyclamen said...

Pat, like this:
First line: five syllables
Second line: seven syllables
Third line: five syllables
No need to rhyme
Extra points for references to cherry blossom ;-)